This thing gave me many warm, fuzzy feelings. It was amazing. You did a great job with Erik, I loved the part where Christine was confessing that they wanted him, and how lost he was, and the thing with the dogs: "“Will we still be friends?” he found himself asking - pathetically, he thought furiously. Like a starving dog begging for crumbs. Even the metaphor made him sad. Erik loved all animals, and the thought of any of them starving made him mist over." That part cracked me up!
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SelKar Sun 13 Aug 2017 01:04AM UTC
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