tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10
Wow, I can't believe I'm finally reading this now! This first chapter was excellent. It shows how much his conscience eats away at him here, but more so because he doesn't want it to let it do that, not because he truly thinks she deserves to live. But I think there is a part of him that doesn't want to be a killer. I love how you have him worrying about if she's dead, and even though he finds the low sounds she makes really unnerving. Because omg the visual you made of those sounds and the look on her face with the bloodied hand and fingers is such a haunting look and visceral reaction, and he's also partially glad that she shows fear because of how much fear she puts into others. I love how he saves her but then reports her needing assistance. Now, without going to the 2nd chapter I'm wondering will she be found and sent back to Wentworth? Will she make her way out of there despite her shock and escape? SO MANY POSSIBILITIES!
Aww, thanks for the nice comments C! And....KEEP READING! ;-)