tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
Wow that chapter was rather amazing. Completely visceral reaction and awesome visual of her time in the box starting from when she went inside it at the prison. I loved how you built up to her thinking she was escaping until she realized she was being buried alive. The hope, relief, and confusion during the time in the box was really riveting and then the parts when she realized she was being buried alive were great. I love how you showed her being completely mute with fear until what we see happen in the show with her screams. It really puts you in that moment of what she's experiencing and I found myself reading along with it almost as if I was experiencing it for the first time. One of my favorite lines and descriptions was how you called the dirt "unwelcome rain." Great chapter and looking forward to going through the rest of the other chapters!