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  1. Another great update! I love the dialogue between James and Mortimer, it feels very natural and in character for both of them. I also like the time you’re taking with the story and your descriptions (such as Mortimer pointing out the different plants to James), I feel really immersed in the story :) Looking forward to the next update but take your time as needed, and good luck with starting school again!!

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    1. Holmes leaning back to listen to Watson - Granada

      Thank you! I'm glad you like the dialogue and that you think it's going well. It makes me happy you like my descriptions and all. I had like 11 tabs to plants open. I'm from the South and I know what's native, but some stuff came later than when this is set (kudzu wasn't a major issue down here till the 1900s, lol). Yeah, I'm hoping I can work on chapter 4 before classes start since I'll have a reasonable amount of down-time before classes start on the 10th, but who knows.

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