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Another great update! I love the dialogue between James and Mortimer, it feels very natural and in character for both of them. I also like the time you’re taking with the story and your descriptions (such as Mortimer pointing out the different plants to James), I feel really immersed in the story :) Looking forward to the next update but take your time as needed, and good luck with starting school again!!
Thank you! I'm glad you like the dialogue and that you think it's going well. It makes me happy you like my descriptions and all. I had like 11 tabs to plants open. I'm from the South and I know what's native, but some stuff came later than when this is set (kudzu wasn't a major issue down here till the 1900s, lol). Yeah, I'm hoping I can work on chapter 4 before classes start since I'll have a reasonable amount of down-time before classes start on the 10th, but who knows.