Comment on One Step at a Time

  1. Overall I love this series and I can't wait to see how it develops.
    The way you make Jack and the little sisters so relatable, human, and real is honestly amazing and surprises me within every chapter on the quality of this work. It is so easy to relate to the characters in such few words it is astounding, you manage to make these people feel so much more than characters on a page (sceen?), and honestly it is a joy seeing this updated and continued in whatever wholesome yet disturbing way this you see fit. The depth provided to these characters, the consequences of their past, it all ties together beautifully and I know I am repeating myself but it astounds me!

    Last Edited Mon 22 Oct 2018 10:30PM EDT

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