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  1. Yeah, OCs can always end up as some Mary Sue SI in disguise, so many fics with OCs feel like a coin toss between "amazing" and "terrible".

    And thanks, I'm glad the fight scenes were okay! The thing I'm most insecure about when it comes to my writing are, by far, the fight scenes.

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    1. While they weren’t amazing this chapter they are far from bad. Though I have to see a longer one for a better idea. But the basics are solid I doubt a longer one would be bad

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      1. Absolutely fair! All I can do is write them and improve so that's what I will do. And concrit is always welcome, so thank you for that!

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