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  1. Makes sense. Maybe you also could add a bit describing the chaos more and how the 7 already fighting and help covering each others openings, and thus Ruby is quick to follow suit. Would help highlight this difference, and aid a bit with the other feedback you got of describing the battlefield more.

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    1. I'm taking all the feedback into consideration! RWBY is a show which prides itself in amazing fighting choreography (barring Volume 5) and I would be amiss to be content with just okay-ish fighting scenes. When I have the time to go back and work over the current fighting scenes I will do so. For now, I will keep the fic going and try to work with the feedback in coming fighting scenes.

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