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  1. Interpreting Edward as a sailor more than an explorer is such a good read of his character, especially in relation to how he moves about ship and how he lives within the protocol & hierarchy of the Navy. The ships stuck in ice also have so much potential for claustrophobia and this weird sense of time standing still (not even going into the sunless winters, oof), so the ships as both an environment and a character adds so much depth, which you did perfectly here.

    The last section really did portray his unraveling sense of self and his mental faculties; the lack of structure really emphasized that!

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