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  1. Loved the vibe of this. It was such a nice little scene, everything was super clear to me and your writing style flows so well! I had to let out a little laugh at the detail of Langa squeezing his thumb to stop his gag reflex, it is a tried and true method that I've never seen anyone else write into a scene like this for some reason lol little details like that add so much charm in my opinion

    I enjoyed this a lot, Adam sort of being super passive (though not too much) and letting Langa believe he's the one setting the pace when it was actually Adam all along anyway was super hot. I also loved how he just watched Langa ride him as he smoked it was a super sensual image to imagine!

    Thank you for writing this!

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    1. Wow thank you so much for your kind words ! I’m glad you liked it !!!!

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