tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
Yessssssss. I think you captured the desperation, the empty-hollow-loneliness, the slight almost dissociation with who Beth is/what she's doing and wanting, and the inexplicable other X factors and everything perfectly. This is excellent. There needs to be a term for "thanks for the feels, I'm enjoying the pain you've evoked." :-) First time in forever I've checked back in on ob fanfic and I am not disappointed.
I second this
Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad this made you check in back into the OB fanfic Scene™, and glad it was a good and heartbreaking time for you. Also I'm honored you liked my depiction of Beth! That means the world to me; I so want to do justice to her character. Thank you very much for reading and commenting!