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    “Patroclus, I can see why Achilles fell in love with you,” Hector's amused voice startled me, and I nearly slipped, my weight pushing clumsily against his.

    “Excuse me?” I steadied myself, tidying my mussed hair.

    “You are extremely lovely.” His eyes crinkled, the bathing light of the waning sunlight shadowing his face. “Pardon me, if that was out of line. I don't think you appreciate that enough: but you are lovely.”

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    29 May 2021

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    This is the most eloquent thing I've ever read. But honestly the dialogues sound a bit too formal for my liking.
    And the "if the future grants us opportunity to meet again, I at least hope it wouldn't result in one of our deaths,” he chuckled wryly. is plainly cruel. I'm not happy anymore.